Monday, August 17, 2009

It made all the difference!

I have this major issue of expecting really high and when thing don't turn out the same, it really hurts! And this is what happened with me when I started junior year, I expected it to be so much and it turned out to be just fine!!! And I am still waiting for something good to happen! Hope things get better! Happy Reading!

I gazed at the sky, sitting by the window
Covered with dark clouds, hanging low!
The chilly wind, pricked my skin
Like a thousand thorns!

I liked it!

I had my hand stretched out,
'Cos I knew, soon I'll be feeling
The cool drops of rain! And then
My hands would go all numb!

It'll feel good!!

I waited for it, my hand in its place
But then what I felt was not rain
I felt snow, melting on my skin
My hands did go numb

But it wasn't the same

And though the crystals melted
On my hand , it felt like the rain
Nothing felt that different, but
My expectations were shattered!

And it made all the difference!


  1. What a sad poem! I hope your junior year turns out to be a lot better, or else you can enjoy the snow though it isn't rain.
    Thank you for stopping by my blog. Your comments were so sweet! Good luck with your writing aspirations.

  2. Thanks for visiting my site and for the link!

  3. nice poem....keep up the good work

  4. That was great! I really wish I could write like that!

  5. Thanks for stopping by and giving me bloggy love! :) ~ AquarianJwl

  6. Stopping by from SITS to say hello! Happy Saturday Sharefest! :) I will check out your friends blog. You should swing by mine and say hello!

  7. lovely poem and thanks for pasing by

  8. Happy SITS Saturday Sharefest :D Have a wonderful weekend. :D

  9. Hi Kaibee, your Diary is by invitation only. Can you possible send me an invite? My email id is Miss you. Since Id it has been crazy here, there are holiday weekends every week and another coming up is Diwali. The kids (Mel included) are off all the time and I'm not getting time to visit my favourite blogs. I'll do something about that, but meanwhile, invite me, will you? I'm on fb too, you can get my id from Mel!

  10. Good work.
    Visiting from SITS. Have a great day!

  11. Hi there,
    Stopped by for a visit from SITS. You have a way with words. Have a great day.

  12. Hi! stopping by from SITS!!!Beautiful blog!

  13. “The expectations of life depend upon diligence; the mechanic that would perfect his work must first sharpen his tools.” Confucio