This piece of poetry describes the empty feelings that rise in me sometimes making me wish that I was as unnoticeable as a particle of sand in the Sahara desert!
If I were a particle of sand in the Sahara desert
I would have danced along with the wind
Twirling and twirling the way it wants me to
No burden, no responsibilities on my head
I wouldn't care about the menacing sun
Or the cold and starless nights
I wouldn't care about the heavy rains
Or the animals that crawl over me
I'll be just like the million other particles
Each individual; unnoticeable and ordinary
But this is why I wish to be:
A particle of sand in the Sahara desert!
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ReplyDeletei absolutely love it. I mean, I have never been a poet or anything but I use to always "collect" poetry because its amazing for someone to conceptualize exactly how you are feeling on paper. I enjoyed this poem so much because sometimes it truly feels like I wanna disappear from life because there are so many things that can weigh you down and try to take you over that its just.....ugh..u know? I seen your post on facebook and Im following you now!
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